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Peachy days, long hours. by =Synith:iconSynith:



There's a bass pluckin' orange juice from the carton somewhere beyond the cotton,
And the farm below, readies the bow to the audience in the sun--
Johnny, from a peer outside a window places the kaleidoscope to his ear, listing for birds among the hedgerow while mother, pulls back the empty sheet from a piano, beginning to play New Orleans themes on the piece--
And I wonder why a magenta thunderbird rusts under the sun and rain, and why the man in the bowler hat steals persimmon trees during the winter solstice.

And there's she with her watermelon smile and daisy in her brow, brown hair swishes in the wind, a dress unzipped like coconut cream sunsets attracts my sight and I lay below the clouds while the silhouettes roll over our bodies--
And the orange-juice man clocks out around 6pm while sun is low in the sky.
Clouds steam on like a ship towards the milkin' moon; she exhales and I take it she's happy to be home.
©2008-2009 =Synith
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Prompt for #PoetryPlease. Write a poem inspired by the season, Summer. There are no real limits so, anything related to the season would be fine.

First draft. I'm not considering editing this further. If you have a problem, please take it up with the sock puppet in the corner.
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great

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Hiss, shout, kick my teeth in, so what? I shall still tell you that you are half-wits. In three months my friends and I will be selling you our pictures for a few francs
- Manifeste cannibale dada
So, ah...Mr. SockPuppet....

=D

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Much Madness is divinest Sense --
To a discerning Eye --
Much Sense--the starkest Madness --
'Tis the Majority
In this, as All, prevail --
Assent--and you are sane --
Demur--you're straightway dangerous --
And handled with a Chain --
Yes? What's the jazz?

:P

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It's kinda like being shot out of a cannon in slow motion.
mmmmmmmmmmm

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"Man is the only creature who refuses to be what he is." - A.Camus
mmmmmmmmmmm!

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It's kinda like being shot out of a cannon in slow motion.
Sock puppets rule!
But I have Legos...

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We didn't start the flame war...
Peeps were hatin on it, before I left my comment.
My sock puppet will battle your Legoland to the death!

And then we shall stroll to IHop.

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It's kinda like being shot out of a cannon in slow motion.

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